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Lamentation

bemoaning I drown ebony triumphs your gold- such a strong soul, yet weakened by lamentation- the taste of salt still l i n g e r s…
Lament Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise Date Written: September 25, 2016

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Date: 9/28/2016 9:04:00 AM
This tanka should not be read unless one is willing to think, at least this one had to reflect and concluded, Wow - that's deep, that's good! CayCay
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Date: 9/25/2016 8:35:00 PM
oooh, what a great last line for this one. I need to get busy on this!! Very good writing from you today, Laura.
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Date: 9/26/2016 10:45:00 AM
thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo

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