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Lament of the Old Man

No sooner was the old man dead did the crows gather round his bed, and no sooner had he shut his eyes did those vultures revel his demise; As soon as all the birds were fed, the candles out, the taste of dread was spread on wings across the skies as his soul flew and my soul sighed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/12/2015 2:22:00 AM
this is amazing!!! And welcome to the soup! glad to have you here :)...hope to read more of your future works...cheers!
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Date: 10/6/2015 10:00:00 AM
Much obliged folks, best poetry site I've found, decided I'd post a few of my own and join in. Thanks again.
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Date: 10/5/2015 5:12:00 PM
Paul This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2015 3:18:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2015 11:57:00 PM
Amazing poem Paul, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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