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IX "Not exactly Rumi...", he quipped, his words charged with full intent. "Rumi writes for everyone," she replied, "your words are meant for me alone." With that he knew she understood but one hundred and eighty-two rhymes could not make Time his soft master. Yet one whisper from his beloved and age melted away and he was Youth once more. Warm Muskoka nights used to make him happy, now they make him cry. They were victims of a passion, raw, not meant to endure; love became the disease instead of the cure. Round and round in dreams she went. "Woman, don't you know me?”, his lament Let me sing to you a sweet melody designed to jog your fatal memory." Do you really think, Bok Hane, she could ever think of you again and smile?

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Date: 6/20/2016 7:08:00 AM
...love the disease not the cure, what a turnaround. Thanks I enjoyed your poem and the lovely twists
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Date: 6/20/2016 7:08:00 AM
...love the disease not the cure, what a turnaround. Thanks I enjoyed your poem and the lovely twists
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Date: 6/17/2016 11:27:00 AM
Awesome Rant and use of RUMI (he's my fav tool too ;) on your poem. Hopefully my sis stops by later today to check out some of the new aweSome poems of today on Poetry soUP... I'm going to rate this one high. You expressed your feelings well, I hope tosee more of your flourishing writes. SkaT
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