Lamb Chops

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Oh freshly baked Persian lamb wet lips smooching meat dipped in lemon pulp all tongues licking chops as berry sauce zings on plates cleared, dish all wiped out such festive treat a cheat day YUM! 6/29/2016 I Love Food Contest of Lewis Raynes --------------- “Epulaeryu” poem is about delicious food. It consists of seven lines with a syllable count of 7/5/7/5/5/3/1

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/1/2016 1:07:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win on this great piece of LAMB CHOPS ! Hugs Eve

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/30/2016 1:50:00 PM

Congrats on your placement...an interesting form. Nice write! :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/30/2016 10:47:00 AM

Lamb chops coming up!! Congrats Nette, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/29/2016 10:37:00 PM

A nice tribute to my favorite food! My late father used to make kosher lamb chops with soy sauce, worsteschire sauce, garlic powder and onion powder. Among many other reasons that is why I miss him. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

Date: 6/29/2016 10:24:00 AM

Now this is my kind of form. I'd try it but might gain weight. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2016 8:04:00 AM

- No .... do not eat those cute little lambs ... -However, sounds delicious Nette :) - Luck in the contest - Happy day ... hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/29/2016 5:59:00 AM

I can't say that I've ever eaten any lamb chops. We don't really get a lot of that here in the south But it looks and sounds delicious.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2016 8:39:00 PM

Marvelous double ones of this form!! Lamb tastes so awesome, Nette. you did a great poem for that contest. Don't know if I thanked you for my recent win but I really enjoyed your contest!! Good luck in this one. I am seeing some real yummy writes.

Leon Datu

Date: 6/28/2016 4:21:00 PM

Goodness, sumptuous dish of a poem. How you tempt this gourmet. I'll be right there to join you!