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Lama Drama

Thoughts that thrive on scattered dreams shoot through the mind like laser beams Hunger echoes a hollow song Voices merge, intestines long Lips are dry, and tongues are parched Memories are pressed and starched No miming board can take the heat Hot irons that scorch the hands and feet. Cold days flow into brackish nights on borrowed hopes and collared pride Answers wrapped in braided woes Crushed, then scattered by angry toes Worry stalks in cleated shoes It leaves a track of pallid blue Just when it seems to reach the rise It folds then doubles up in size.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/23/2013 5:03:00 PM
This is one incredible poem. With an awesome ending. This will go in my favorites.
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Date: 2/2/2013 4:23:00 PM
Michelle, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:30:00 AM
This a fairly acid write for you, Mikki. You do love to nail the truth. "Worry stalks in cleated shoes." OUCH! tough write. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
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Date: 11/20/2012 6:57:00 PM
Justin's comments are spot on, Mikki! What a skill at couplet writing! I struggle to find a creative voice with all the busy-ness of my present life...haha...nice job! A very special Thanksgiving to u and your family. gwendolen
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Date: 9/25/2012 2:31:00 PM
Magnificent caliber in your metaphors my friend! One needs no more convincing of your mastery of articulation - no doubt masterful & original - this goes to the FAV. file - I could easily spenda week internalizing,philosophizing and romanticizing the second stanza in particular - I could surviv on this degree of skill for a long time - J.A.B. %
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