Lake's Water

glistening, sparkling incandescently bright blue pool of mystery

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2014 9:03:00 AM

I do enjoy a good mystery.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/16/2014 10:17:00 AM

ty Rick hugs

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/15/2014 10:13:00 PM

3 Lines...speak volumes 7 my best, chuck

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/16/2014 5:10:00 AM

hi Chuck ty very much for enjoying it hugs

Debbie Mills-Kelly

Date: 2/15/2014 4:10:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku !! :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/15/2014 5:33:00 PM

ty again Debbie nice of to visit my work hugs

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/15/2014 1:01:00 PM

"Teach"...smile, I love the imagery you portray here-in. Love this, Linda!xoxoxo//Robert

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/15/2014 3:25:00 PM

I know your weakness for this form ty Robert hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2014 8:56:00 AM

Yes, what is in there?..Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/15/2014 3:24:00 PM

ty Sara for your gracious comment hugs

Jerry Bolton

Date: 2/15/2014 8:29:00 AM

I love this haiku, Shadow. It expresses your unique thoughts perfectly clear even though the lakes water is a pool of mystery. Love it. Uh, did I say I love it?

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/15/2014 8:46:00 AM

lol Jerry you did ty what a lovely comment hugs