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Lake of Tears

for all that tears sooth, my breath takes wing toward my opal lake, newly created from each salty droplet, still singing, while wishing you to be a leaf floating upon my silent joy. by Lisa Lee Theme: Temple of Life Contest: Sijo In A Temple 5/8/2014 **Please note: there is more than one meaning to the word "sooth", meaning "truth" and "real" and a lot different than "soothe"** Also, for many interesting factoids, look up the history of the "Opal"** Many of my writings will have a historical treasure hunt embedded within the meaning(s) of special words.

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Date: 5/15/2014 11:12:00 PM
Love this, sure am curious about the treasure! :)
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:46:00 AM
Ahh!! Creative and imaginative work..A leaf floating inside the opal upon that salty lake..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/15/2014 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! I love your writings as well! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2014 8:47:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Sara
Date: 5/12/2014 6:43:00 PM
Your Sijo is also beautiful, Lisa. For me this is one of the lighter and more delicate images I've seen. You're still a winner by conjuring this beauty. :)
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/12/2014 7:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jake!
Date: 5/12/2014 3:11:00 PM
I love this sijo, Lisa! One of the best I've read so far...and the 3rd line really captured my imagination! // paul
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Date: 5/10/2014 2:25:00 PM
Truly beautiful, Lisa. Your description took "my breath" away. Best wishes in the contest! Peace and blessings, carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2014 4:17:00 PM
You too, Carolyn! Thank you and God Bless you as well!
Date: 5/9/2014 12:32:00 PM
I've read a couple of these even the one I entered, but this..this is beautiful and well crafted..in my opinion should be number one..hands down...bravo to you
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Date: 5/9/2014 12:46:00 PM
Frederic, thank you so very much for your very nice comment! You're a sweetie! :)
Date: 5/8/2014 9:44:00 PM
love how you said opal lake, and the last line is incredible. Just loved that.
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/10/2014 4:21:00 PM
Once again, thank you, Andrea! You're a dear!

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