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Lake Morning

Powdered gray, the moss, intricate lace, decorates giant cypress on the shore gnarled knees offer post where watchful birds keep vigil- holy lake sanctuary. Copyright, September 19, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/30/2014 1:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Faye.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 1:39:00 AM

the images make me fly, faye... like andie, I'd give this no.1 spot.. cheers on your stunning win.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:31:00 PM

wow. Of all I have yet seen, this one may have been my number one if I had been the judge!! Congrats in the contest. How are you doing?

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/27/2014 5:44:00 PM

Hi Faye, Interesting subject matter and execution. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win. Take care. Earl

Abdul Malik

Date: 9/27/2014 10:18:00 AM

Nicely written. 'Where watchful birds keep vigil'. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 9:53:00 AM

Wow wonderful lake morning Faye! Congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 9:14:00 AM

I just love being on or near a lake. This is a lovely picture. Congratulations Faye.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win with this gorgeous choka.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2014 6:20:00 AM

What a lovely choka and attractive morning sight, Faye! Makes for a deserved win.....congratulations! // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 2:09:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Faye

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2014 3:34:00 PM

what a vivid and perfect picture of nature... wonderful piece of writing, faye.. hugggs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2014 8:45:00 AM

wonderful imagery Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 9/19/2014 7:58:00 AM

Well done Faye, paints a nice picture of a quiet lake.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/19/2014 7:14:00 AM

How beautiful. God's handiwork is always a source of comfort and joy. I've just gotten back from holidays. I understand you're still on vacation. Enjoy, my dear.