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Lake Lover

Luna’s image reflects on flat water; she smiles at her likeness and ripples softly quiver. Beneath the glinting surface another universe exists where subaqueous creatures live, busy in their nests. Moss shawls arm drape low on sitting cypress tree, ungainly, with legs so short below her knees. Yellow pollen gathers brightly, floating along the dock forming lacy fabric, the moon’s evening frock; oh, that I could be she waltzing on this liquid floor, evermore a lover of the lake. March 6, 2022

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Date: 3/19/2022 8:23:00 AM
Faye, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your wonderful poem full of imagery ~Constance
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Date: 3/18/2022 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with this well-deserved writing, Faye. I hope you doing well.
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Date: 3/8/2022 1:40:00 PM
just gorgeous, Faye. you have that WAY!!!
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Date: 3/8/2022 1:00:00 PM
Lovely penning Faye, with great imagery and mesmerizing tone to hold one in its grasp. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 3/6/2022 8:46:00 PM
Wonderful poem that creates a picture perfect image, Faye! I especially liked the line, “ forming lacy fabric, the moon’s evening frock”..brilliant! Best of luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 3/6/2022 3:28:00 PM
I love your beautifully imagery dear poetess, gl in the contest, this is wonderful to read .
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Date: 3/6/2022 3:07:00 PM
Hello FaveGibson so nice to meet you. Well done . I felt like I was there. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 3/6/2022 1:47:00 PM
I read your poem with interest and hope you will continue to favor us with your work.
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