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Dusk Ripples all gone Silence broken Crickets frozen songs Darkness above As below Now Where I am in repose Quite quite dead An unmoving Story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/31/2016 2:38:00 AM
beautiful image and imagery but I agree with Tim there is an air of intense loneliness and sadness in your words:-) hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:42:00 PM
Story of me life
Date: 3/30/2016 9:49:00 PM
Freakin' brilliant yo, i love it!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:42:00 PM
You are a genius!
Date: 3/30/2016 9:47:00 PM
very melancholy. I feel a solitariness and a faint bit of sadness....beautiful
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:41:00 PM
and no ice, no hockey!

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