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"Laid Upon Their Alters" qhapaq hucha it begins at birth the most precious resource of all we are registered, audited, one by one under the rod measured by lizard rule the capacocha children of complacency dumbed down, some thorns, uppity, removed heads counted to be held high as trophies, those played and won for the greater good oh yes, we belong; we belong, we’ve always belonged, to the ruling class sapa inca orders sacrifice, daily all are held up to the Sun of the others’ huacas, accountable, we are ears of corn sheared and scattered kurnels sown to replenish a new world fresh crops laid upon their oily alters falls the empires one by one like conquistadors they dissolve us holy sees parted red and bleeding we are all children well drugged foreplay for prophecies all war rooms cleanly wiped disinfected, by fire baptised deja vu submerged together we are something else to behold realm of the four parts these final moments matter (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) “With their royalty and focus of worship destroyed, the general population readily accepted Spanish rule as “what was done.” This created local assistance which, along with outside factors, allowed the Spanish to completely conquer the region by 1572, marking the end of the Inca Empire.“ “This pattern of manipulating a people’s concept of ideological power, in conjunction with relational and material power, is seen throughout history and is often a large component of the fall of great empires.” "That’s why the banalities matter. When the real issues come up, healthy states, the ones capable of handling and minimizing everyday dysfunction, have a great deal more capacity to respond than those happily waltzing toward their end. But by the time the obvious, glaring crisis arrives and the true scale of the problem becomes clear, it’s far too late. The disaster—a major crisis of political legitimacy, a pandemic, a climate catastrophe—doesn’t so much break the system as show just how broken the system already was."

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Date: 11/1/2022 8:29:00 AM
Wow. Lot's to ponder in here. I've read and re-read several times. Thanks!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/1/2022 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Linda. Never a dull moment here.
Date: 10/27/2022 5:44:00 PM
This poem was of a higher caliber then I expect to see on a night of casual reading. Truely great work, Lady Labryinth
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Date: 10/27/2022 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Kyle. Comparing the fall of the Incas, along with Stephen Hawking's thoughts in link below (referencing Spaniards), and with what is escalating (it would appear) in our world at present - everything - made me see certain similarities, that one could consider, alarming. Existential crisis or not. Leanne
Date: 10/27/2022 4:32:00 PM
"How do you know if you are living through the death of an empire?"/Mother Jones, 2020.
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Date: 10/27/2022 4:32:00 PM
https://www.motherjones.com/media/2020/03/how-do-you-know-if-youre-living-through-the-death-of-an-empire/
Date: 10/27/2022 4:26:00 PM
I read about Capacocha...so very sad. Wasn't it the Incas who also sacrificed young and old, removing the heart still beating? Yes, we need to be very aware these days as our society becomes fractured. Your poem was enlightening.
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Date: 10/27/2022 4:57:00 PM
Incas didn't remove the heart. It was the Aztecs. But yes, I think very tragic. I read after drugging, the number of methods despatched for sacrificing ; one was to bury alive. Now there's a Halloween story, in itself. How awful for a child. Incas mainly sacrificed the children, those who were unmarred and perfect, only the best for the God/s. Boys usually up to 10, girls up to 16 (all untouched/virginal). Children are still being sacrificed today in our world, have been forever, through sex trafficking, child sex abuse, DV murder-suicide. Drugs. But overall, I found myself comparing our world today, with that of the Incas and how they were destroyed by the invasion of the Spanish and other ways, like disease, famine, destruction of religion, war over territories, treasures (natural resources, minerals...but underneath it all, oil) etc. When you think about it, we are all children up for sacrifice.
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Date: 10/27/2022 4:44:00 PM
It's relative to today, in a way. Is the 'empire' of humanity in rapid decline and about to be exterminated, or are we facing an extinction level, that opens the way for rebirth? I cannot help but to sense/feel? that with the current state of our world, humanity is racing towards some major event. The tempo of world events seems to be escalating to what point of singularity, one can only guess, will there be a point of singularity? Perhaps we are hoping for a miracle. Most of us are complacent and contentedly go about our lives, pushing it neatly into a back corner of our mind for contemplation when the sh** eventually hits the fan, if indeed it does. But that's purely my perspective (aka an existential crisis). Thank you for your thoughts Ann.
Date: 10/27/2022 3:57:00 PM
Capacoha/qhapaq hucha
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:58:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Capacocha
Date: 10/27/2022 3:56:00 PM
Pizarro & the Fall of the Inca Empire
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Date: 10/27/2022 4:20:00 PM
https://www.doaks.org/resources/online-exhibits/epidemics/century-of-sorrow/andean-transmission
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Date: 10/27/2022 4:19:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spanish_conquest_of_the_Inca_Empire
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:56:00 PM
https://chass.usu.edu/international-studies/aggies-go/news/the-fall-of-the-incas
Date: 10/27/2022 3:55:00 PM
Stephen Hawking's warnings: What he predicted for the future / BBC News, 2018
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:55:00 PM
https://www.bbc.com/news/science-environment-43408961
Date: 10/27/2022 3:54:00 PM
Children of Llullaillaco
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:54:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Children_of_Llullaillaco
Date: 10/27/2022 3:53:00 PM
Final Moments of Incan Child Mummies' Lives Revealed/ Living Science, 2013
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:53:00 PM
https://www.livescience.com/38504-incan-child-mummies-lives-revealed.html
Date: 10/27/2022 3:51:00 PM
Children of Llullaillaco/Tour Express, 2021
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:51:00 PM
https://tourexpress.pe/the-children-of-llullaillaco/
Date: 10/27/2022 3:50:00 PM
Primary Music Video, embedd. Pauline Oliveros, Stuart Dempster, Panaiotis ?– Deep Listening (Full Album) / basscadet
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:51:00 PM
https://youtu.be/U__lpPDTUS4

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