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Lady~of~the~west

~ Hathor ~ ~ symbolic, rattle ~ ~ goddess of fertility ~ ~ graceful horizon ~

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Skat A

Date: 11/19/2015 9:05:00 PM

Awesome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 1:38:00 AM

Graceful

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/16/2011 1:51:00 PM

Oh such a terrific haiku.Thanks for your very kind comment.~LUV~Teresa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 10:04:00 PM

aha, you want to have lots of kids then? I love that last line. ARe you in America? Luv,Andrea Ps. I'll save your very first post to read later!!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/9/2011 9:21:00 AM

Well done, Lin-Ra! keep the mystery flowing!...Gert

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/7/2011 6:18:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku!.I really enjoyed it ,Hathor

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2010 8:17:00 AM

I was rereading this one (think I read all your poetry, Hathor) Did you ever answer me where you live? I love the line here "graceful horizon!"

David Smalling

Date: 12/27/2010 7:54:00 AM

Compares to my poem on the Lizard, same mystique. I am enjoying your haikus

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2010 9:46:00 PM

Where are you from, Hathor? And that is nice I saw this. I was unfamiliar with your name and was thinking it might be male. What country are you from? Or are you right here in the USA?

Royal Trevino

Date: 11/13/2010 1:35:00 AM

The after bite has comes with power I see. =(^.^)= Royal

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/12/2010 10:52:00 AM

welcome to the soup...and thank you for your comment on my work!!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 10:31:00 AM

Interesting, it reminds me of your next haiku with the trees swaying

Adell Foster

Date: 11/11/2010 9:07:00 AM

A very interesting haiku indeed Lin~Ra, such facinating imagery captured within so few lines. I thank you for sharing the read and for your most welcomed comments on 'Willow' ... Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/10/2010 6:24:00 PM

wonderful use of each word, lin-ra. great 'ku ...thanks for sending me a special note in my winter haiju.. warmest, nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2010 2:46:00 PM

Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting..Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/10/2010 1:09:00 PM

Nice\, mystical feeling in thsi one. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/10/2010 12:49:00 PM

I ejoiyed the haiku with nice images to convey your thought, and thanks for your comments on my work, Hathor

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2010 10:35:00 AM

Very interesting haiku, Hathor. The reader can see the godess on the horizon through your description. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy the time you spend here sharing your poetry. Best wishes, Carolyn