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Lady of the Lake

What is the attraction with the lake? Why are we drawn to its side? Is there something mysterious about it? Is there something it's trying to hide? Does it hold the deep dark secret Of a lady in a flowing white gown? Was she the victim of some evil doing? Did she unceremoniously drown? This is how the old story goes You can believe it or call it poppycock A jealous lover tied her feet to a boulder Threw her off the end of the dock Now every evening at sundown As a mist starts to rise from the water The shadowy figure of a woman appears The image of somebody's daughter The tortured spirit of the “Lady of the Lake” With her mournful cry for release Forever to rise from the lake at sundown Nevermore to rest in peace!

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Date: 8/16/2017 1:07:00 PM
Wonderful pen my friend :) xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/16/2017 1:43:00 PM
You are very kind my dear Mo!!! I'm branching out!!! Happy to see your name... love and stuff, Jack xxx
Date: 8/16/2017 11:48:00 AM
SPOOOOOOKY! Actually it does twang a cord. Is it a local tale? Up here we have the tale of the headless shepherd, very gruesome indeed. What a surprise I like it. You must be a real cracker on Halloween. Nothing wrong with adding more titles. It was smooth as butter.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/16/2017 1:39:00 PM
Don't need an army with an stunning bod like this... I'll send a pic!!! Be prepared!!! xxx
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/16/2017 1:07:00 PM
You and whose army?
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/16/2017 11:55:00 AM
"Smooth as butter!!" Today though, "it's smooth as Becel" LOL You were up pretty late last night! You may have to be punished... until I figure out what it will be, GO STAND IN THE CORNER!!! Still love you though! xxx
Date: 8/16/2017 7:28:00 AM
What a wonderful Quatrain my friend! Such a brilliant flow and stupendous rhyming placed upon the poem! I rather enjoyed reading your delightfully frightening piece about the Lady of the Lake...a true story nonetheless! What a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/16/2017 10:49:00 AM
What has come over me????? lol I'll get over it! Must remember, I'm the Limerick King!!! Cheers!!!

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