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The hopes that she stood on were taller than reality, But from such heights she could see very far, On the bounds of what she dreamt of she thought there must surely be, her love, her life, her anchor, guiding star. To any passing paramour she stretched out willing hands and for brief moments desperately clung but trying to pluck roses from where stalks of nettles stand eventually leads to getting stung. He hove to view like sunrise, warmed her face and lit her eyes a chiselled jaw and eyes of polished steel an easy charm that could disarm completed the disguise all boxes ticked, he answered her appeal. But like the locusts in their swarms that seek to overpower his time with her was brief then he was gone he stripped her harvest, plucked her heart, and then her soul devoured and left a hollow shell, her dreams all gone. She tightly gripped the bannister and gazed three floors below this staircase she chose for her last device swung over both her legs and without pausing she let go and thus in just one day she'd fallen twice. Today she welcomes visitors with arms out to embrace though no-one takes her offer, just like then for the beyond has stretched a silken veil across her sallow face protecting from more sorrows, that are men.

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Date: 9/3/2016 7:15:00 AM
You never fail to amaze me "Viv" - I love all of your writes - all of your depth - I feel I know you - though we have never met . . . ; )
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:08:00 AM
I remember commenting on this amazing write Viv, but dont so e my comment here now. Congratulations on your second placement. I am honored to be in your company my friend! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:40:00 PM
Hi Viv, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis, appreciate the visit. regards, Viv
Date: 8/29/2016 12:29:00 PM
Terrific write Viv, congratulations...
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie, a bit of a gloomy phase for a while. Viv
Date: 8/29/2016 10:11:00 AM
Viv, very good poem and I love the pic that you chose...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:08:00 PM
Thanks for the placement, Laura, now get back to cheery and kooky :) x
Date: 8/25/2016 3:22:00 PM
What an amazing and vivid write, Viv! I was totally caught up in the story of this haunting spirit and the tale of her demise. Excellent imagery and really captured the spirit, 7+
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:15:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, funny how subjects for poems crop up from nowhere, isn't it? Viv x
Date: 8/24/2016 3:44:00 AM
The picture reminds me ever so much of the Parr family mansion that stood for years up in the old wood - The footings of this once huge building are still there, and still visible amid the undergrowth of the walled grounds. Great atmosphere, Viv - Loved it! My very best regards. :) john
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Date: 8/24/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, John, written in complete darkness- literally. At some silly hour. The Muse doesn't work regular shifts. Thanks for stopping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/23/2016 10:36:00 PM
Viv, this is dark, this is poetry, great write!
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Date: 8/23/2016 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, I must lay off eating mature cheddar before bedtime . Regards, Viv
Date: 8/23/2016 11:31:00 AM
You held my attention throughout this magnificent write Viv. Which basically confirms the belief that most men are "pigs" and most women are too "dramatic" Way too many great lines to quote starting with the very first one. Just great poetry! I love this 7.
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Date: 8/23/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, I know ghost stories should be left until the night before Christmas, but these lines came into my head at 2:00a.m this morning, so I had to get up and finish them. Regards, Viv

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