Lady In Blue

Moonbeams beckon on my window tonight Dragging me out of this comfort to view Delicate splendor impassioned so bright Refulgent waves from this lady in blue Dazzling in beauty, dignity and grace Taut string of pearls adorning her bare neck Highlight her dimpled and delicate face Her eyes enchanting with a caramelized fleck Soft scarlet lips with a wry little smile Yellow cloth headband holding her silk hair I stand there in awe and gaze for awhile As sweet scents of lilacs float through the air Strong my heart thumps for the lady in blue Finally knowing my dreams could come true

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2016 10:19:00 AM

Now this is how you do a Sonnet! Lovely!

Robert Heemstra

Date: 2/29/2016 5:31:00 PM

That's the way sonnets were suppose to be! That was perfect sonnet Tim! Great job!

Red Fiery

Date: 2/28/2016 7:34:00 AM

This Lady is really beautiful and you have done complete justice to her beauty. The poem is marvellous and the poet is more than my description ( simply amazing !) I would like to read more from you...hugs Red

Mothiram Pushpala

Date: 2/28/2016 12:28:00 AM

What a romantic song! Nice imagination and expression. Poetic to the core and thrilling to the end. Congratulations on your great skill.

Denis Brezik

Date: 2/28/2016 12:12:00 AM

nice read thanks

James Inman

Date: 2/27/2016 8:56:00 PM

Tim, lovely write.

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 2/27/2016 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful! I can see her! Thanks for sharing an congrats on POTD!!

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:31:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Cindi

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/27/2016 2:05:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet ... CayCay

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:29:00 PM

Thank you very much CayCay

Carlene Simpson

Date: 2/27/2016 1:13:00 PM

I can surely see her now......Congrats to you and your 'lady in blue', Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Carlene

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/27/2016 12:20:00 PM

Congrats on poem of the day Tim, this is really nice, I've read it a few times now and the colors really paint the soul :)

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:28:00 PM

Thanks Cas. I was surprised at this one.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/27/2016 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations my friend on POTD. I told you this was a great sonnet. Peace my friend:)

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:26:00 PM

Thanks again my friend..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2016 9:55:00 AM

This is exceptionally beautiful, filled with such vivid imagery, almost like a painting by the moonlit sea-shore. A fave.

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:25:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine . It would make a beautiful painting. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2016 6:58:00 AM

- Romance will always delight, congratulations p.o.t.d. Tim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:24:00 PM

Thank you A-L...I was surprised at the selection

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/26/2016 10:00:00 PM

Beautiful poem, where the heck is this place, love to see that me self! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 2/27/2016 8:23:00 PM

Come over and we can look together the go watch the puck drop...thanks for the help in our quest for the Cup....you did get a quick young center in return though