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Ladies of Poetry Soup

I read their words and stand in awe Poetic words that have no flaw For an old sailor who has seen his day These ladies still take my breath away They write with passion and hearts of gold And as they write, new worlds unfold Their legacy will be carved in stone Each has a style all their own I read each word and dwell on each line On a dreary day, they make the sun shine I sit at my computer as another day closes I feel like a thorn in a bouquet of roses.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2012 3:22:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your complimentary verse..Congrats on your win..How is everything in your life?...Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/13/2012 10:31:00 PM

Good to see your win today Vince..)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/13/2012 6:23:00 PM

How gallant of you Vince. Congratulations. on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2012 3:37:00 PM

congrats Vince on a super win for PD's souper contest with this excellent entry of tribute to the ladies luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/13/2012 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in P.D.'s get well soup contest Vince. You added the perfect pinch of sugar to the soup Vince. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/13/2012 2:52:00 AM

Wow this is lovely Vince and every girl on the soup should feel very flattered. congratulations and well done xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2012 11:30:00 PM

VINCE., , Congratulations! with your wonderful soup poem. I'm feeling much better now. LOL... except the folks around me. I got Nate and my granddaughter sick. SHAME ON ME! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING my contest ;-) I much enjoyed your entry, ~ always*PD

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2008 12:04:00 PM

Superb closing line! What a wonderful tribute to our talented ladies... again, your cadence and rhyming are exquisite and your content sublime! BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith (PS when you have time please take a look at 'Portrait;' you need comment only on one part. Also, 'Nightscapes' and 'Forecasts.' They are all tributes to T.S. Eliot.) Thanks! K.