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Lacquered Lace

Softly silver snow sifts, soundless, lattice-like, a lacquered lace of layering light, startling sparrows, shyly shivering for shelter, on leafless, lustered limbs - lancets, londonite. November 28, 2017 For Alliteration Contest

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Sandra Haight

Date: 12/9/2017 3:38:00 PM

Nicely done, Faye! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2017 7:29:00 PM

Well done Faye, congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2017 4:47:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Faye:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/8/2017 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Faye, with this charming piece. // Barry.

David Mohn

Date: 11/28/2017 10:42:00 PM

tremendous Faye

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/28/2017 7:11:00 PM

Faye, a lush and lustrous scene depicted in beautiful layers of alliteration. I love all the soft sounds associated with your snowy and wintry imagery. Beautiful and good luck in the contest.. Warmest wishes.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2017 5:03:00 PM

absolutely beautiful alliteration and imagery Faye:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/28/2017 3:50:00 PM

Wow, wow, wow Faye! Excellent! : )