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    In this form that is called an etheree, one additional syllable must be added to each line to create the triangle.

    They are usually unrhymed, but I managed to rhyme it.

    Metering appears to be impossible because of its inherent structure.

Since The prince Saw the maid While on parade, He determined she A timid wife would be. In palace they were wed And proceeded to royal bed. There brutality revealed that he Had neither conscience nor morality. His depraved abusiveness did not abate, So twenty years of misery became her fate. Pretending to obey, she slyly managed to hide Her inner deep revulsion till the hated despot died Quite suddenly from cyanide amid her silent laughter. So the new widow reigned as queen happily forever after.

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Date: 3/27/2018 3:26:00 AM
The wonderful style of writing and the matter too. Good luck, my dear poet.
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Date: 3/27/2018 11:12:00 AM
Thank you for reading this and for your kind comment.

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