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Lack of Love

I know what makes you Cruel … the same thing, makes me Cold an Utter Lack of Love if the Truth, be Told … … a Harsh, Razor-Reality A Frozen Heart – Is So Icy … like a Solid-Block Picture-Frame nothing Shows Thru… not even Shame I know what makes some Cruel … the same thing, leaves me Cold like some Emotional, Ice-Pick that Chips away and Scolds… I hear your Fear, tho’ not Spoken it Glazes over Frostbit and Broken a Rage and Ache, which Never Stops like and Icicle-Spear, that Never Drops … take Alcohol… Its hard to Freeze But even in Your Vapor Breeze Your Lungs Compress a Frigid-Squeeze You, start to Shiver, Swear and Sneeze and I Watch Your Nippy-Nose Bleed and Your Callous, Chilling-Deeds for No Matter, How Low You Go… You Can’t Survive… in Sub-Zero… I know what makes You Cruel Same thing, makes me Cold an Utter Lack of Love… Deep within Your Soul For there’s no Fire, in a Crystal Jewel until a Sparkle … Rules * * * Avalanche ! … Meet My Echo ! Your Storm-Blizzard… is Only Snow And Icebergs Which Block… Must Thaw You Must Melt… It Is Love’s Law! … For Every Sole-Snowflake’s Goal is to Join Another and Blanket Whole… I know what makes You Cruel … the same thing, leaves me Cold …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 4:20:00 AM
Do you know what you just did MoonBee? I do !! You left me speechless. ~~Outstanding~~ Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2009 6:07:00 PM
Another cool write lady, 'Perfect love doth cast out Fear" or melts which ever form fear chooses to manifest in. In any case, love's law dissolves it into nothing.God Bless, Sincerely Moses Oh yes ofcourse I am fed by your witty writes, keep them comming!
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Date: 9/16/2009 2:50:00 PM
really, really good...grrth
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