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La Elsa Tableau

Lost silver’s feral As it swirls aqua ~ Elemental chance looms on fins primal Sated or not, swims and grins......eureka! (3/26/2021: picture 1)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:32:00 PM

Back with my congrats. Enjoy your Easter Weekend, Susan.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 4/2/2021 9:31:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea... you too :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:49:00 PM

Great imagery, Susan, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Susan Woodrow
Date: 4/1/2021 5:33:00 AM

Thank you:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 3:10:00 PM

Well done, Susan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/31/2021 5:16:00 PM

Thank you :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 5:26:00 AM

Very nicely penned Susan, Congrats on your win

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/31/2021 5:17:00 PM

Thank you :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/29/2021 10:34:00 PM

Excellent entry for the contest, Susan love it..

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/30/2021 8:20:00 AM

Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2021 5:17:00 PM

very cool imagery of that picture number one, Susan. All the best in the contest.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/29/2021 5:54:00 PM

Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2021 10:39:00 AM

what an excellent interpretation of the picture prompt, wont ever get me diving ... except for the last chocolate in the box lol:-) then i;d look like a shark/whale lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/29/2021 1:27:00 PM

Thanks Jan...lol i snorkel mostly as I don’t like the breathing against resistance of scuba and breathing thru my mouth feels awful unless I’m gasping for breath and hopefully it will never be coz of a shark confrontation...i do want to swim with a whale shark though. :)

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/26/2021 11:33:00 PM

I love sharks and mourne the fact that they have mysteriously departed from our bay. A few rules such as never to swim at dusk or dawn will keep most people safe. I enjoyed your poem and the thought process it had triggered. :)) ~Sus

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/27/2021 10:04:00 AM

:))

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/27/2021 6:51:00 AM

They are unfairly maligned and it is their habitat we invade...yes, the other rules i know are no flashy jewels and for island free divers, no trailing the speared catch by your side... glad you enjoyed it :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2021 2:08:00 PM

Sharks are so frightening. You captured the fear they evoke so well, Susan, and I love your description of "fins primal." Best wishes for a win! Carolyn

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/26/2021 2:17:00 PM

Thank you :)