Get Your Premium Membership

L O V E

L- Lost in you, and lost in nothing but youre eyes. O- outside, and inside i can see through youre soul. V- Validateing and breathing in youre heartbeat as it sinks into the rythum of mine. E- Elivateting the sound, and the rythum of youre love, and i put my patterns at youres, becoming all but one. This Exciting love that now what i can never forget the Envirormental and Eprehensive Expermental love, that is now mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/11/2010 2:44:00 PM
Very good write!!! Here are 2 of mine you might like. "The sun Inside" & "Just Me and You" search my name and you should find them. Love your thoughts on them...Luv Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 6/10/2010 9:20:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned.Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2010 12:45:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family... enjoyed your creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2010 5:49:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Miranda. Excellent Acrostic. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2010 5:21:00 PM
I like this acrostic and the essence of the subject. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things