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Kubo

KUBO
The “kubo” now complete and done With all the spirits and blessings Adorned and commends All sights of beauty existing No faults of structure than woodborer Can ever be commented to dissuade One night or two or month long Of couplings and bliss Under the moonlight moaning Pure gold of love shared Oh, I know and we know we care So much perfect for honeymooners That no one would dare Put a footprint like “hasta la vista”
Terms: Kubo- Filipino term for a hut, a small dwelling made up of local materials, generally constructed in the suburbs. “Hasta la vista” Spanish term for see you later.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/6/2012 11:32:00 PM
I can see why you wrote "Ahem" in the comment of my poem. What you have here is a nice little poem that has added a new word to my vocabulary. Before reading this, I was unaware of what a "kubo" was.
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:06:00 AM
I am sure you treasured your stay there, Dalila! How awesome that you finally were able to see it and I know you will be back :) I do eat kambing, so not really icky ;) I hope you have a wonderful Christmas there in Seattle-- thank you for dropping by and congrats as well on all your wins :) hugs to you!
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