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Kona Bear

Knowing browns of molten Tiger’s Eye give me a loving look One ear cocked, and the other is always half-flopped just so Now and then, her exuberance forgets she’s a large Alsatian as she snuggles for cuddles as a wiggly fur ball named Kona… Bearing colors of her timber wolf kin, she is more like a lamb Eagerly, she’ll swim to fetch a stick, which she’ll then go hide away in the thick bramble she will scramble while I yell whoa! Returning home, she’ll lick my toes till I’m filled with laughter... (12/11/2019 For my favorite animal contest)

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Date: 1/10/2020 5:39:00 AM
A good companion. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/10/2020 11:25:00 AM
yes. thank you, Kai :)
Date: 1/5/2020 9:40:00 PM
Read this with a smile for sure... gettin a dog soon... thanks Really... gettin a dog soon...
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/6/2020 12:55:00 AM
glad it brought you a smile...I live with three dogs, a cat, and a turtle - none of which are mine but we are all very attached to each other and since their owners are gone most of the day, we have gotten very used to each other and they take me for walks most days :)
Date: 12/13/2019 11:52:00 PM
Susan, What a special dog treat this poem was. No stranger to dogs....happy Friday all. -Richard
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/14/2019 1:28:00 PM
thanks Richard :)
Date: 12/12/2019 7:00:00 PM
this is so charming. She sounds like a wonderful dog to have!!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/12/2019 8:11:00 PM
thank you...She is :)
Date: 12/12/2019 7:00:00 PM
clever form to use
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/12/2019 8:12:00 PM
thanks :)
Date: 12/12/2019 3:38:00 PM
Lovely acrostic Susan, really nice piece. blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/12/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Gordon....sounds so cold in Scotland! :)
Date: 12/12/2019 12:28:00 PM
This was a beautiful acrostic and I could feel the love in each line. Pets are wonderful and do make life so much more "Bear"able. Your pup sounds amazing and so lovable.
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/12/2019 12:38:00 PM
thank you Chris...that's true...she is very bear-huggable. She's actually a room-mate's but we've sort of adopted each other and she spends more time with me since I work from home, while her owner's gone most of the day :)
Date: 12/12/2019 9:28:00 AM
This was wonderful. I was right(write) there with you. Lovely imagery, excellent giggles... Ann
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/12/2019 11:14:00 AM
glad you enjoyed it, Ann..yes, Kona can always make me laugh or make me move (I get very sluggish when the weather turns chilly) as she insists on getting her way, in a very charming manner :)
Date: 12/11/2019 1:22:00 PM
Hello Susan Woodrow, your poem is cute. it made me smile. Merry Christmas. Have a nice day my friend.
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/11/2019 1:24:00 PM
Hi Darlene...glad you enjoyed it ...thank you :)

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