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Komorebi

Whilst shrouded in dark dungeons of deep despair, in monk mode, soul choosing therein to be still, plunges deeper into the void, as a dare, feeling, not thinking, surrendering its will, astonished to see light flicker through the air, even as bliss magnetism begins to trill. As wafting scents sublime suffuse feeble form, pristine presence is swept away in love’s storm. Slow seduction, concealing and revealing, joy of union and pang of separation, a joy ride through time, delight so appealing, game divine of polarity rotation, reviving resplendent rapture freewheeling, is what but God with us in conversation? Breathe in, oh hermit, each life breath in surprise, in childlike wonderment, beholding bliss rise.

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Date: 12/4/2023 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful, I love your recognisable poetic voice and excellent interpretation of the prompt. Well deserved placement :)
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, dear DD :)
Date: 10/31/2023 2:55:00 AM
You describe the imagery perfectly. Great use of alliteration. Blessings.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thank you, dear Victor
Date: 10/30/2023 11:01:00 PM
Those alliterations!! And what a profound take on the prompt! Absolutely love this! The depth and flow and wordplay is brilliant! Always a pleasure reading you
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Date: 10/31/2023 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, IE. Alliteration and internal rhymes are useful tools if not overdone, I guess :)
Date: 10/30/2023 2:49:00 PM
I like this, great take on the contest :)
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Date: 10/30/2023 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, DD

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