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Robert H The twists n turns, the fire that burns, in life’s sweet meditations, Patience saw ol Rex did squirm, did she did him in, the lation:) Liz Shivers here babe, emotions slave, but in the mind we often grasp, the tender words, the little laugh, when love was sweet n brave :) Joyce An it flows n flows n on it goes, great verse here little sister, yes you are right, the Lord the light, the ever glowing Mister:) Don Johnson 12-aug-11

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2011 11:45:00 PM

I really like the one you did for Joyce. Fits her so well. LUv, Andrea

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/11/2011 9:02:00 PM

you're just so dadgummed masterful, DON JOHNSON!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/11/2011 8:37:00 PM

How nice to find my name and poetry in your poem. Makes me proud of my big brother or was it cousin? Loved it. Love, Joyce

Don Johnson
Date: 8/12/2011 5:14:00 AM

I'm either the big or little bro u never had, nice to be in the family, had....this time:)

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/11/2011 8:31:00 PM

Outrageous and Funny write Mate....Good on you Don I say!!!!......with love...old Jack

Don Johnson
Date: 8/12/2011 5:12:00 AM

Love you too Jack old mate, keep the poetry coming, never too late, hey cobber.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/11/2011 8:30:00 PM

You are a master of unique words and rhymes! I just love reading it all the time! Maybe you'll go all aglow, and your writing presence will totally show---everything you know!!

Don Johnson
Date: 8/12/2011 5:10:00 AM

Hey Russell this here you wrote, is a rhyme of note, seems what ive got must be catching ...holt :)