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Knowing You Are There

Together we share... it guarantees we care.. I know I can do anything as long as you are there.... Standing my ground on things that I care... You give me the strength to speak my mind... We are two souls, which have intertwined... Our journey began when I was born... On that bitter cold September morn... You gave me a Bunny, that played a tune.. It was about the Sun, and not the Moon... Then you gave me a hug and a sweet little kiss... And told everybody you just got your wish... You make me smile when I have a bad day.. And always have positive things to say... I dedicate this to you my Brother... As you are not like any other... Your love for me has helped me grow... To become the best Sister you’ll ever know....

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2016 7:43:00 PM

KJ, this is a touching and a wonderful poem. a very encouraging end. SKAT

Kj Force
Date: 6/11/2016 10:28:00 AM

thank you SKAT...everything I write is a personal life experience, sometimes with a " twist " as seen through my eyes.. wearing "cracked rose coloured glasses "...

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 11:40:00 PM

Hope you let your brother read this, I'm sure he'd be delighted. "You gave me a Bunny, that played a tune.. It was about the Sun, and not the Moon.." < I'm not sure exactly what this refers too, but I can tell it has had a sentimental impact on you. A fine tribute.

Kj Force
Date: 6/11/2016 10:34:00 AM

this was a children's song that the stuffed animal ( brother gave baby sister when she was born ) titled " You are my sunshine "..based on my grandson and his baby sister..she still to this day worships him...if nothing else I ever accomplished in my life..they will remain intertwined spirits...

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/21/2015 2:57:00 PM

A very sweet dedication!! Our siblings do shape us. An uplifting, refreshing piece to read;thanks for sharing! Always, Laura

Kj Force
Date: 9/24/2015 11:21:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting..glad you enjoyed. This poem was inspired by my G-D and her Brother, whom she worships..

Yinka Peter

Date: 8/28/2015 5:44:00 AM

what a beautiful piece. I love it.

Kj Force
Date: 6/11/2016 10:25:00 AM

thank you.. glad you loved it....it is about my granddaughter and her admiration for her brother...