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i wrote this after talking to a few friends on facebook inspired this after so many losses of innocent life where in my prayers every life is precious this last few days going on human violations ignored why  we see the writing on the wall and hide not me i speak it how it is in my mind 

It's the pain laced cold reality check crashing winds hurricane blowing the tail end landing with news processed Suffering human rights ignored pains through prides green eyes a legion filled with envy money signs the pact Your a joke monster of a devil whom mocks and violates this earthly gift who armed Isis Or any other of these so called rebel groups world terrorists are to blame bullies for such deadly sins taking life's of your fathers sons They will curse you to hell and back forever the damned armed with the devils tools destruction of humanity creeps closer Crawling dark matter from the dirty underworld dead bones rise scattering ash burns to dust Blood of our brothers and sisters spill upon grounds seeking peace sins with their poisonous greed Oil is now the dark matter reaping souls without Divine mercy kills with hate His judgement comes on the final day they hide in the mountains of who they are Claiming to be something they are not humane begs the question inside truth World dominating powers invade with bombs to dominate and destroy a world's grace Doomsday is there no end to your horrid need for suffering Your games Satan faceless entity hiding in the shadows a snake turns against God's seals without spine dark matter Think human morals out seriously They have gone upside down deciding fate our future generations life children cry in the drop of a hat inside core Out of this world tilting balance towards revelations trial of life we see answers unfolding blinded no more by falseness good against evil begins the battle I believe in faith a great source holding power over hate so my prayers are for peace dove of an angel sings the joy with love and understanding the book of good conduct God blesses all those afflicted deeply

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/17/2015 10:45:00 PM
Excellent and lovely dedication. Heartfelt write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/17/2015 1:24:00 PM
excellent
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Date: 11/17/2015 1:23:00 PM
such a excellent write loved and liked
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Date: 11/17/2015 8:58:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! The passion and power of your most outstanding write here, "Knowing Right From Wrong," certainly rings loud and true. ISIS, and everything they stand for and the people who follow them, are the SCUM OF THIS EARTH!! The struggle of Good and Evil is on ample display for all of us to see. Brilliant Work my great friend!! May God Bless You!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/16/2015 9:14:00 PM
Wow, now what a lovely dedication tiss is.
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Date: 11/15/2015 7:02:00 PM
Hi Liam!A very outstanding n' most powerful heartfelt poem,you've written here my dearest friend,Liam.Very sad but very beautifully written with lots of deep caring, compassion understanding about all.Yes,what happened in Paris is a very horrible tragedy,Liam.My heart n' soul are very heavy n' I'm crying alot , for all these barbaric n senseless killings.Very sad n' we need pray a lot for the whole world, Liam.I know you have a very beautiful heart n soul Liam, a heart of pure gold n' I'm sure you deeply feel n' care for all this.Thank you so much for caring alot, n' writing this very beautiful piece,Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden pen!Excellent tribute!Awesome.Superb!I love it!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.I really hope you're doing okay.Always keeping you in my prayers!Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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