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Knocking On Heaven's Doors

I’m knocking on heaven’s doors, for I need to complain to the All Mighty. No one cares to answer me. I’m left to ponder with my drizzling drenching drips and drops of tears. I intensify the pace of my knocking but eerie silence of quietness greets me with a complimentary bouquets of black roses. Yelling and vociferating my anger in a pouring rain of words drenching and flooding the world with layers and coating of fresh pain. I’m knocking on heaven’s doors, for I need to complain to the All Mighty. No one cares to answer me. I’m left to ponder with my drizzling drenching drips and drops of tears. I intensify the pace of my knocking but eerie silence of quietness greets me with a complimentary bouquets of black roses. Yelling and vociferating my anger in a pouring rain of words drenching and flooding the world with layers and coating of fresh pain. Why did you take my father away? What pleasure does it make you feel to see eyes cry? What sick and twisted pleasure do you get! from killing the only thing I had as a family? Tell me! Answer me! Why won’t Anyone answer me? He doesn’t belong to you so give him back to me!! Now!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 2/12/2016 11:22:00 PM
SOLUS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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