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Knocking Down Towers

A toddler builds a tower Then he knocks it down with glee And every time the fun’s the same; That is a guarantee. This type of play’s preparing him For what he’ll face in life – The highs and lows, the joy and pain, The beauty and the strife. The trick is to retain, with age, The child’s determined view That once his effort’s tumbled down, It can be built anew. But even if we can retain That optimistic slant, To laugh when things all fall apart Is something we just can’t.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/10/2015 5:50:00 PM
Wow, awesome message in this one ilene. I still cry and throw temper tantrums. :)
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Date: 2/10/2015 12:53:00 AM
Very nice pen Ilene! A joy to watch children building towers n castles etc, dear friend.Have a lovely day!In His light! God bless! :) love n' hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 2/10/2015 12:29:00 AM
:) Your observations of life are so timely shared in your rhymes, my dear. I'm simply enthralled. That last line...yes find myself unable to smile when things fall apart. :( Good one, sweetie. Hugs
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