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Knock By Knock

Penetrating atmosphere Flattering the torn and wistful ozone Passing by the Milky Way Breaking through Orion Nebula Stopping in exploring Pinwheel Galaxy Peeping at the depth of the Black Hole Then flying away looking for boundaries Hello Mr. Hawking, what the heaven are you doing here? Anybody home? Are you there, Mr. Einstein? Knock by knock at the door of any dimensions I see many things. Almost everything. Yet I wonder is there anything beyond everything? I just keep knocking and knocking Hopefully I will collide with the untouchable beyond Somewhere Sometime Somehow

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Date: 3/21/2009 8:58:00 AM
Interesting perspective in this poem. I like the way you ended this piece. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem and for sharing your writing with us. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 3/20/2009 4:53:00 PM
Very nicely done! -Alyssa
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