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Knight In Night

Mosquito's brave knight Unstoppable in the night But fear is one clap ELAI CEE @2015 HAIKU

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James Peranteau

Date: 1/8/2024 10:54:00 PM

forget your beauty, though i comment very little, when i scan and notice the poet sleep'n; it's "crack, wake me up" ;)

James Peranteau

Date: 5/8/2018 10:22:00 AM

Where is the great writer

Elai Cee
Date: 5/16/2022 5:51:00 AM

Hi James! It's been a long time. I stopped writing poems for years, but I am trying to write more again. Thanks for this overwhelming comment. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 10:07:00 PM

nice little poem. Elai. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 8:48:00 PM

ELAI, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/12/2015 1:55:00 PM

A peril worth fearing! Nice Haiku!!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2015 5:21:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Elai! I like the image you transmitted to my mind. That final line is impressive. // Thank you for visiting my posts and commenting on my poem "Love is Free". All the best. // paul

Milton Robertson

Date: 4/28/2015 8:18:00 PM

In a nut shell. So brave yet so fragile. Wonderful.

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/27/2015 7:55:00 AM

A tremendously well-worded Haiku. 7++++!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/23/2015 8:01:00 AM

This is so clever! I really like it! 7!

Elai Cee
Date: 4/23/2015 10:28:00 AM

miss ya Richard. Thanks for the comment

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/20/2015 1:27:00 AM

Impressive imagery, kabayan. Kim :)

Elai Cee
Date: 4/20/2015 9:19:00 AM

thanks KIM

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2015 1:20:00 PM

7 - love your haiku, just like my "Mosquito Flight" blessings eve

Elai Cee
Date: 4/19/2015 8:04:00 AM

thanks Eve :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2015 1:06:00 PM

very clever haiku:-) Hugs jan xx

Elai Cee
Date: 4/20/2015 1:08:00 AM

hi Jan thanks