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The colors in your sweater do not grow here but bloom without regard in the mirror of your cheeks We ran with arching strides through seas of igneous poetry written for our electric white lashes Our layers of sturdy bone And yes, there were times we nearly escaped the snap of the metallic sky the same confessor behind matronly curtained hills the only words to tie me here are the mouthful that rattle my cup yet I can always paint myself miles deep beneath this anchor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/23/2012 5:25:00 AM
((()))((()))Clap!Clap!Very creative winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2012 1:40:00 PM
I really liked the imagery you used here, Julia! Very unique!! Your first stanza reeled me in... congrats! :)
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:21:00 AM
Julia, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win x
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Julia. I really love that first stanza to describe the person's cheeks!
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Julia I. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:46:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Julia
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:36:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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