Kites

sky forever blue dragon's tail soaring , tumbling earth-bound men flying

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/10/2010 5:50:00 AM

Hi Barbara. I love the rhythm of this. I feel it is so clever to be able to capture the imagination of others with so few words. I have absolutely no expert knowledge when it comes to poetry. I only know what I like,and I like this. luv to you-June-(Sylvia)

Date: 10/5/2010 1:45:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2010 10:57:00 AM

From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Barbara. Love, Carol

Chuck Keys

Date: 10/4/2010 9:19:00 AM

now i want a kite - great work

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2010 7:08:00 AM

wow, great message!!!

Steven Mossburg

Date: 10/4/2010 2:28:00 AM

I really like this. You paint a beautiful and vivid picture. Very well done. Steve

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/3/2010 9:05:00 PM

Awww Barbara ... the imagery in this haiku is wonderful ... I want to take a moment and thank you for letting me know about my place in your contest with "last minute heaven" that poem has a special meaning for me and is due to be published in four months ... thanks for that means a lot to me as its my first placing on the soup :) love and big hugs always Jayne