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Kite Flying

the young boy running his kite lifts into the sky delighted laughter his dreams no longer earthbound oh, the possibilities 4/2/15

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Date: 4/18/2015 12:44:00 PM
Hmm, Interesting and memorable.
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Date: 4/5/2015 6:45:00 AM
Top marks for this Tanka, Barbara. The kite lifts, so do the boy's dreams! A happy atmosphere...the boy's laughter is witness to it. Take care. // paul
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:25:00 AM
er, keyboard playing up.....
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:24:00 AM
Sorry about the typo, Barbara. ??q? uo p??oq??? ? ?nq i ??i? ?s?? ??? si si??
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:23:00 AM
Lovely, gentle innocence. Great work. Good luck., Barabara. Viv x
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:26:00 AM
Ahh!!! I can just see the scene..Sometimes an old woman likes the kites as well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2015 9:55:00 PM
love the comparison of the kite to dreams not earthbound any more, barbara. best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:46:00 PM
beautifully penned Barbara good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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