Kite

I am the flight of the wind you would not see t'were it not for the string you held beneath me and if the wind you think you understand lies within the grasp of your hand then next time that wind should blow with all your strength try letting go

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/23/2009 12:10:00 PM

How sweet this perfect for spring poem is. This is poetry month. Call a school and offer to let them read it...or you read it. Keep writing, Dane

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/23/2009 6:56:00 AM

Wow. An awesome and powerful few lines you wrote here. Extremely well done. Love it in fact. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/4/2009 4:34:00 AM

I love this piece because I am home in Jamaica when I read this.. I am flying my kite and having our little kite wars in the air..well done.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/4/2009 3:41:00 AM

Wonderful, very imaginative and okay its too early in the morning to think of the word I want to use but there's another word..whatever it is I love it Gerry.