Kisses

My next first kiss Will be with you, And I suppose, My next last kiss Will be yours, too.

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Thomas Martin

Date: 5/4/2015 5:57:00 PM

Very original romantic!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/4/2015 7:00:00 PM

Thanks a bunch!~Jan

Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 3/26/2015 9:20:00 AM

Sweet and very faithful in spite of the What If...

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/26/2015 11:24:00 AM

Life is full of what ifs, so can we ever be totally sure...The suppose was thought. "Next last kiss"- the one you just gave or the very last one ever. This was just rumination on what a first/last kiss is and the knowledge that I still get a first kiss every day even though I've been married for 21 yrs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 6:09:00 PM

Sweet one..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..I hear and sometimes see the geese heading back to in the spring and going south in the fall..We have an unusual thing here in that there is at least one flock of Canadian Geese who stay here year around..Now they are at a pond in the city and they feed in the park there..Sara

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/10/2015 9:55:00 AM

Thanks for commenting. Now that I know the gese have flown home. It's time st start looking for the hummingbirds. Then I'll know Spring is really here! funny how we all look to nature for signs. It's more reliable than the weather man, no doubt!

Skat A

Date: 2/14/2015 12:51:00 AM

So sweet, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 2/18/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thanks for the comment on Kisses. I can never decide if I actually like my very short poems.