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Kissed You Hello

Thick grey-white clouds paint the sky over leafless limbs of large maple trees ones in warmer days we'd climb At frosted windows I stand looking out through glazed eyes remembering times where our smiles couldn't hide and our days seemed like they would never end. Those sunsets were so surreal their soft glowing rays I could feel along with your smooth sun-soaked arms wrapped around me so tight you could have held me all night Oh how I wish time could have stood still as I looked deep in your soul and I kissed you hello.
12/27/2015 Any Poem Contest Sponsor : Broken Wings

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Date: 1/26/2016 10:11:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/18/2016 8:48:00 AM
TIM, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:43:00 PM
Romance is dancing in the pretty poem. Congrats Smith. Anisha D
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Date: 1/17/2016 7:59:00 PM
Ah. Tim, a lovely romantic poem that warms the heart! Congratulations on your awesome win!
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Date: 1/17/2016 12:51:00 PM
Very lovely and romantic, Tim; you never fail to deliver! Congratulations on a very merited win. // paul
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Date: 1/17/2016 8:18:00 AM
A charmingly beautiful poem, Tim. It appeals to my inner glow.
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:02:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this very romantic poem! Very well written, lovely.
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Date: 1/16/2016 11:40:00 AM
Tim, congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 12/31/2015 8:25:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Tim...sounds like an amazing moment. I know Id want time to stand still too. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/28/2015 11:44:00 AM
Ah , this is so beautiful romantic poem , one of my favorites actually...u show honest feelings and pure love also a great devotion and that what makes u a spectacular poet...I wish u a merry Christmas and a happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/27/2015 4:43:00 PM
Romantic to the last line, Tim. You have a very romantic soul. Beautifully penned. Thanks for your visit earlier to my work.
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:33:00 PM
very beautiful, Tim. I liked this one a lot.
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:02:00 PM
charming write Tim:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:51:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Tim - Everything is possible ...... The impossible just takes a little more time :))) - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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