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Kiss the Sky

Sky encompassing protective dome Light shifting shades of daily change Dark starbursts disembark with moon God in grandeur reigns above veil We remain fallen on bent knee Praise kissing heaven in humble poem © Kim van Breda—1 February 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2014 3:24:00 PM

Lovely poem, Kim!!

Jayne Eggins

Date: 2/11/2014 7:13:00 AM

Kim, This is a beautifully uplifting write I am so glad I stopped by to read tonight, thanks for the read on my poem it was much appreciated love Jayne x

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/10/2014 10:41:00 PM

You're home!!! WOO HOOO!! =D It was a damn pleasure to meet you & your husband a few months ago! This writing shines so, so brightly! :)

Kim Van Breda
Date: 2/11/2014 1:13:00 AM

Drake... thanks for stopping by.. couldn't stay away too long-- been busy with my sons upcoming wedding though. Great to have met you in beautiful Sacramento too. I appreciate you encouragement as always xx

Darren Watson

Date: 2/10/2014 12:41:00 PM

I'm not usually slow in finding anything that lifts my heart as this poem has done but you can bet i'll be tuning in for many more heart warming moments from now on. Daz

John Beam

Date: 2/10/2014 9:53:00 AM

I enjoyed with smiles thanks for sharing

Kim Van Breda
Date: 2/10/2014 11:55:00 AM

Thank you. I have been off the radar for awhile on P/Soup , but plan to get back into the swing of things soon :)