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Kiss the Rain

Summer's heat sometimes holds a mid-day shower, and as children we would run and play with giggling glee. With open mouths, and open hearts, we splash in hollows tasting all the rainy day fares and their beauty In muddy roads, in soggy grass, how we'd splash and play; we'd ring-around-the-rosie hand in hand, then all fall down. Rain-kissed were we, infants at play in nature's beauty unashamed, we lay upon each other on the ground. Date:2/22/13

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Date: 4/16/2013 6:45:00 PM
Hi Debbie, very nice poem, i will be reading more, i liked it. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:14:00 AM
lovely describtion of rainy day thanks!
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Date: 3/1/2013 1:41:00 AM
Deep write..i love it..thanks :-)
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:54:00 PM
I do remember those day,,,, love the memory's,,, thank you for reading my Wasn't ME ;}
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Date: 2/25/2013 5:53:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Fun times of childhood__a great memory..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2013 5:03:00 PM
I love how you made this such a happy one about the rain, Debs. VERY nice.
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Date: 2/23/2013 1:38:00 PM
Life is easy to enjoy before we begin to care about the rules of others - nice window Debbie - J.A.B. %
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Date: 2/22/2013 10:15:00 PM
A happy rainy day. Something I see less than half the time. Great job on this one, describing the scene and people.
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Date: 2/22/2013 9:41:00 PM
Poem has a nic aura about it, taking us back to a lost time. Rhyme is supurb. I always read a couple of times to hear the rhyme without seeing it. This one lays it in there almost invisible, but you can definitely taste it. Good write.
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Date: 2/22/2013 5:52:00 PM
Harkens back to childhood. Oh to be young, innocent, carefree. Nicely written Debbie. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 3:43:00 PM
This is a nice poem....:-)
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:11:00 PM
- Sweet memories ... Debbie, lovely. - Good luck in the contest. - Have a relaxed and pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:09:00 PM
nice cool summer showers for a cool lady . like it xx
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