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Kiss the Rain

Kiss The Rain My Son Kiss the rain and feel the warmth wash all your sins away. Hush lil darling, Mama's coming home to take all your pain away, the morning light will be shining bright right before your eyes. I will rock you under the autumn tree while the rustling of the trees shimmer like crystals on the leaves. 'Till we kiss the rain all over again,And take cover 'till our day begins in the morning light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2009 10:32:00 AM
This poem brings out the images in the mind, bringing out wonderful thoughts about love and how life can really be wonderful. thank you for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:05:00 AM
Brilliant. I would see this as a lyric poem. the music in it is wonderful. At first I was turned off by the use of 'lil', but it fits the narrative beautifully. The imagination that went into this cannot be exaggerated. It is a truly wonderfull and life enhancing poem.
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