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Kiss of Sunshine

I am a grand yellow flower Feeling so forlorn Jack Frost just nipped me Now I am bent and torn My head is flopping over No strength in my stem Need a little bit of sun To warm the chill within What’s that I see above me I am sure I saw the sun Here I am, here I am, I shout Kissing will be fun I smile now as my head lifts No longer bent that’s good Been kissed by the sun all day No longer need plant food What is my name I am asking Lifting my sun kissed head to you I am the pride of Wales A smiling daffodil that’s true.

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Lynn Glover

Date: 4/10/2013 6:58:00 PM

Superb job, great write. Keep up the good work, I love your poetry.

Wayland Bunch

Date: 3/15/2013 4:30:00 AM

I think I'm reading another poem with double meaning here. I could be wrong, but the words flow so well. Great work either way.

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/15/2013 12:09:00 PM

glad you enjoyed it Wayland...Seren

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/15/2013 3:26:00 AM

Just wonderful, Seren...Love the way you make the daffodil come alive and talk...'Jack Frost just nipped me'...Perfect - Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/15/2013 12:10:00 PM

lol thanks Tim...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2013 11:57:00 PM

this is adorable, Seren!!! Love it. and your avatar too!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/15/2013 12:23:00 AM

Hi Andrea,thought writing from the flowers point of view would be different. Thanks for the comment.....Seren

Victor-Alexander Chibuikem

Date: 3/14/2013 9:26:00 PM

Awesome description...

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/15/2013 12:22:00 AM

Hello Victor, thank you for stopping by....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2013 2:57:00 PM

Great work describing the Daffodil..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:27:00 PM

thanks Sara, i enjoyed writing it ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/14/2013 2:08:00 PM

Clap clap clap, bravo! I like your take on the contest.

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:28:00 PM

do i get 3 hip hip Hoorays as well, lol me cheeky now ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/14/2013 12:59:00 PM

And what a lovely little daff you are , love it and we could do with some of that sun here , my daffs have still got scarves around their heads as they have kept their greenery underground xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:29:00 PM

mine are showing there heads but the frost isnt doing them much good....Seren

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/14/2013 12:29:00 PM

Love your new pic... think I told you before but I'm telling you again! What a sweet poem, dear Seren! Hugs... xoxoxox

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 PM

Thank you for the pic comment.. glad you liked the silly poem....hmmm maybe you will write about a shy daffodil jack....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/14/2013 12:29:00 PM

This is truly beautiful and wondrous my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon my friend! I enjoyed the sunshine within your write! What an awesome piece, quite the amazing poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:30:00 PM

Hello Russell, glad you enjoyed it....Seren

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/14/2013 12:22:00 PM

What a fun upbeat poem... the kiss of sun is wonderful for humans and nature.

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 PM

Hi Debra, thanks for stopping by....Seren