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Kiss of Dawn

gentle kiss of dawn sheer curtains filter sun rays touching me with light golden flecks ride the cool breeze I wake to daybreaks splendor By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders First place in One to Fifteen Any Form (Brian Strand)

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Jon Arno

Date: 3/10/2012 6:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/7/2012 4:41:00 PM

congrats on your 1st place win; a lovely tanka, good flow, and every word perfectly placed :-)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/7/2012 12:31:00 PM

Very nicely said. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2012 10:23:00 AM

RHONDA,, ANOTHER ;-) CONGRATULATIONS... NICE WORK IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... ALWAYS~PD

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2012 9:30:00 AM

Awesome way to wake up in the morning Rhonda :) congratulations on your great win in Brian's contest :) blessings Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2012 8:09:00 AM

congrats Rhonda on a lovely first place win for this gentle write and imagery filled poem luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 7:37:00 AM

Good Morning and Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One To Fifteen" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/7/2012 7:10:00 AM

cheers to you rhonda for the win!..:) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2012 7:08:00 AM

Congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 9:00:00 PM

another wow poem, Rhonda. GREAT imagery.

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/27/2012 11:26:00 AM

Lovely touch with the gentle kiss of dawn, loved, bl

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2012 10:26:00 AM

soft and beautiful tanka..Charma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2012 1:18:00 AM

silky touch and feel of dawn here, rhonda.. bewildered by your fine piece!... so soft; i like!..:) huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2012 12:35:00 AM

Very good imagery here Rhonda.Enjoyed.