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Kiss of An Angel

Your lips speak soft sweetness While you hold me tight in your arms And you begin to say, "I love you" So I began to kiss you And your kiss felt like a kiss from an angel But your spirit didn't lift up The same way you made her heart fly when I cought you Now I go back and wonder Wonder if the soft sweetness that was murmured out your lips was true And if your kiss was really a kiss from an angel Or maybe the way that I was held in your arms a way of telling me goodbye But I guess I would never know Cause now I'm with someone who lips speak true words of love While his arms are wraped around me me in abondent time And is getting tighter each second And when we kiss, His spirit lifts him up high While an angel looks down and begin to smile He whispers, "I love you and this kiss that given was given by an angel I just thought I let you know and I hope you feel the same way about me too"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/5/2012 11:25:00 PM
That was ultimately a pleaseant thought and a pretty good write. You're on your way to becomming a pretty poet. I just have three suggestions. Proof read, proof read, proof read. I see six mis-steps. Maybe seven. I'll have to look up "abondent". But all in all you have a very nice poem here. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing. Rockman :-)
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