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Kiss Me Quiet

It's near midnight, whilst we moonlight walk Palm tree lined fairway, Crickets singing Hands clenched in loving vacationed talk Hearts in wanting pound, Batangas is bringing We, she and I, now amidst our intending lock Serenity is the scene blessed by lunar watch So late, but joyous we, soon our lips are speaking Clouds now hover as we witness natures rain Our apartment is distant, we welcome given Through broken lunar light, stroking her mane My hands in taken then, sensuously they're driven Kiss me quiet is whispered, hearts now in reign Walking, slowly walking, absorbing to us this night Hearts in touching pound, Batangas has brought .

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/2/2016 11:46:00 AM

A nice composition. Conveys the emotion! Congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/2/2016 6:54:00 AM

Congrats James, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 8/1/2016 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations James on the placement of the contest

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 12:43:00 PM

so sweet. You have a way with writing, James. Enjoyed this poem. FOREVER **SKAT**

James Fraser
Date: 5/29/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thank you so much SKAT :) FOREVER back at you, happy weekend to you :)x

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/13/2015 3:10:00 PM

Saw the familiar title in the top list and just had to read. The love and romance is almost palpable in this poem! Such flowing lines. Made more so by beautiful Batangas I and those from my country are familiar with. I smiled at the knowledge that someone I know has inspired this write. Well, I enjoyed your poem, James. Again, here's to more romantic days for both of you! A 7. Kim :-)

James Fraser
Date: 5/13/2015 3:28:00 PM

Thank you kindly Kim. Batangas is indeed beautiful, no beaches visited though :( maybe next time? Loved Lake Taal though :) my favourite volcano. I'm smiling at your wishes, thank you so much, hugs // James :) :)

James Peranteau

Date: 4/21/2015 9:07:00 PM

Ooooo, a wonderful romantic scene here dear poet ! I'm glad I read this ! Have a good one my friend.......much love, james

James Fraser
Date: 4/23/2015 1:12:00 PM

Hiya James, catching up on some comments here. Always smiling when I see you here. Blessed day to you my poetry friend, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/19/2015 7:22:00 AM

Huge James, :)!!!! what can I say more but a lovely wonderful poem!! touched!!!.. :)!!!! ((warm hugs)))!olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 6:05:00 AM

Well huge one, I know exactly how that feels.. :D!

James Fraser
Date: 4/19/2015 12:31:00 PM

Yes indeed, the wonders of being transported ;-) pure reciprocation of warm hugs//Dino James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/19/2015 10:47:00 AM

vivid that you transpirted me there with you... :)!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/18/2015 9:39:00 PM

What a beautiful poem..It seems as someone is in love with.the Batangas and all the beauty of a she.A fav! : )

James Fraser
Date: 4/19/2015 12:34:00 PM

Blessed Sunday to you Charmaine :) Ones heart has been caressed and touched by such beauty of she, and I haven't stopped smiling for weeks. Warm hugs winging their way, James :) xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2015 4:34:00 PM

dear prince.. if this is the batangas in my country, you are soo right about it.. what a fine, splendid write,, hope you can come here.. awesome!.. huggs

James Fraser
Date: 4/25/2015 12:24:00 PM

The images I've seen of Batangas and the Philippines in general are absolutely wonderful, hugs always//James xx