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Kiss In Daycare

I remember her from my daycare Not even sure if I was yet in underwear She had blue eyes and blonde hair I guess I was dab and debonair. From the first day we began to play blocks We hit the point of stealing each others socks I could tell it was heating up Because she drank from my spill free cup!! At days end we were lining up at the door She jumped in front of me as she had done before. Then it happened, it happened so fast It was a magical moment from my wee little past She bent slightly forward, eyes closed, puckered lips… I thought what is wrong with her face and hips I did not see it coming just thought something was amiss But she ended my day and started my life with my first kiss. Now this tale might be a little tall But so was everything when I was small Her name was Shanna and it did happen in daycare So my story is not too tall from there. Contest YOUR FIRST KISS, FIRST LOVE, or FIRST BROKEN HEART Brian Magness

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Date: 4/19/2011 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Brian in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:42:00 PM
Nice descriptive work Brian.Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:37:00 AM
Super Congrats Brian on your 2nd place win . Unimaginably cute love there.Enjoyed this..Gautami
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:27:00 AM
best wishes to you, brian , for a fantastic piece and win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:25:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your win, this is a great write. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:44:00 PM
I could see it all so very clearly. So tender is young love. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Brian Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on a great little poem and a great memory. Day care yet. And congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your wonderful win in Frank's contest about kisses and luv ..such a cute entry .. enjoy with luv and happy weekend too..
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Date: 4/15/2011 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2011 7:33:00 PM
cute little piece you penned here, brought a smile
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:56:00 PM
Such a delight to read of your first kiss. You must have been an early bloomer to receive it as you described in daycare. I was 15 before I had my first kiss. Surely, Frank will admire this poem, Brian. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2011 2:54:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..What a great memory..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2011 10:33:00 PM
What a darling poem this was. And wow, you sure started young!!
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Date: 4/8/2011 10:39:00 AM
As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such wonderful poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Brian. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:15:00 AM
Nice romantic tale taking place in daycare, very creative and seems to be a real event in your life, Good luck, brian
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:10:00 PM
thats so cute
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