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Kiss Challenge, (Nathan Your Next)

Kiss Challenge Taking the ice cubes, from the tray I coated your lips, with mineral spray Then lemon squeezed, for a taste of zing Then lightly froze, the opening Tracing the corners, and laugh lines blessed I kissed your lips, of happiness Tender, succulent, passionate lips Pulling at my loins, with tender sips Sucking each, until they swell Then freezing again, to ensure the spell Next I tickle, the skin around With tongue, I dance inside the frown Resisting more……………. I break away To tempt you love, another day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ great way to break a writers block, think pink

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Date: 6/19/2009 11:33:00 AM
DAMN!!!!!! Have a great day, Alexandra. Vince
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Date: 6/18/2009 7:51:00 PM
whoa Sandra! the soup is HOT!!! thanks for comments too! jim
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Date: 6/18/2009 4:50:00 PM
ahhh to kiss. victom or friend and at my age try this? oh yeah i'm still professing to be young so i might try. John
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Date: 6/18/2009 3:30:00 PM
I love challenges! Alright let me get to work on it and see if I don't get turned on lol. Nate
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Date: 6/18/2009 3:06:00 PM
Note to all, this was a reply to a comment Nathan L. made to me from a comment I made to him. In his poem about soupers, he refers to writers block. I commented that a writers block does not exist, if nothing else, describe a kiss. Most can't do it without getting turned on. I must admit, I failed miserably. -AA
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Date: 6/18/2009 10:34:00 AM
I'll never look at ice cubes the way again, lol. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:56:00 AM
Wow !!! ,. AA , what an absolute WOW !! , Yessss , write onnnnnnnn PS , This is not about the Pink Panther , No ??? If not , it left me panting !!! More ice pleeeeeese !! ..
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:46:00 AM
You certainly create a passionate mood with erotic images, Alexandra. I may paste this one over my bed so I can read it when I need some...uh...inspiration? Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:39:00 AM
Go girl...!! This will melt those ice cubes quickly!! :)
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Date: 6/18/2009 5:52:00 AM
This is fire...I am blushing and picturing...nice..
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Date: 6/18/2009 4:04:00 AM
Very Schmexii!Espeacially The whole "Sucking till it swells"(!)Wowers:p
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