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* Single moments of passion can last forever ... (re-posted for a friend) * ~ your silken skin gleams opaline bathed in Luna's soft wash of cornflower - like a porcelain Madonna by Michelangelo conjured to life by the magic of moonlight your eyes open just long enough to affix mine, and affirm I'm in a mode of veneration (you're casting the line) the soft details of your visage above me are close enough to occupy my entire gaze, but far enough that I can interpret your every expression and you're well aware of it (setting the hook) as your gentle sway attends the cadence of my core, you teasingly open your eyes just far enough to let me know they're rolled back in an aspect of rapture and by seductive design, you nip your lower lip with your teeth and hold it there (reeling me in - carnal captive) the beating catches in my chest and takes my breath with it heaving up and arching you with it's wake, as you take advantage of my movement my breath finally returns in a guttural sigh, and as if trading an erotic dialogue your supple chili pepper lips curve into a gentle smile, born of the knowledge that I'm now completely at your mercy the spice in your smile freezes my gaze to your mouth, and my mind's eye conjures up fresh, plump raspberries and soft whipped cream making me thirst for the nectar-sweet taste of what's inside as if my thoughts were your own, your smile relaxes and parts just enough to tempt me with the fleshy fruit of your tongue, and I reach up with my right hand to the back of your head (my left hand at its own quarry) weaving my fingertips through your hair, I pull your head downward as you relax until your face is just close enough to be out of reach of mine and you turn it quickly to the side so it's completely bathed in moonlight for you know all too well how that slays me (the moon painting your skin) eyes still closed the sexy smirk returns to your face with the confirmation (via my sighs) that your seductive game is having its desired affect repeating the process you turn your face back toward me and play peek-a-boo with your tongue opening your smile just enough to torment me with it's moist gleam, bouncing playfully just inside your mouth as if waiting for it's first taste of ice cream you relax your neck and I tug your head gently but firmly down again, toward mine but as before, you turn your face at the last moment smile sensuously, and taunt me with your parted lips - sugary tongue making more of an appearance this time after tempting me with this ritual, 'juste assez' you stop one more time just short of my face, and THIS time it's MY mouth that stays closed ... so you softly brush my lips with the tip of your tongue and wait, as I continue my feigned role as the 'reluctant lover' turning the tables of this tottering tease (if only in my mind) but we both know it's all for show, that you're in complete control of the game - holding all the carnal cards you, my Queen of Hearts very slowly and deliberately your eyes finally open and hook with mine the reflected light of the moon just enough to sparkle life into that gaze that RUINS me, sullen and vulnerable and YOURS yours ... to the depths of my bare soul where I can't run or hide or escape the grasp of your heart on my very being where love's visceral truth cries out for it's own knowledge where it longs to be consumed by it's own passionate hatred for anything that isn't US you giggle, and like THAT my breath is gone again and this time it keeps catching in my gut as I gasp again-and-again for it's return but that LQQK holds me boundless (as boundless as my body holds yours) I am drifting, swirling, falling ... INTO you our spirits are now melding so completely that I almost feel ... ALONE we are so much of one element that "we" feels like "I" - and it terrifies me ... how can I be looking into your eyes, and at the same time feel so completely taken by you, that I AM you ... and you I? I have to close my eyes for an instant - just long enough to remember where I am and WHO I am and when I open them again yours are closed, (thank heaven) and my breath finally returns in a massive surge of adrenaline my dopamine-filled blood rushing and coursing through my body like music in my marrow, my skin awakening to your tender touch I look up at you and that coy, sexy, knowing smile is still warming your face (my reward, close) my hand is still on the back of your head, and I relax my grip just enough to let your hair fall ... you shake it gently so it now hangs child-like about your face framing it like a fallen angel's halo very delicately, I pull your face down toward mine one last time (still smiling - helpless before you) and just before your nose touches mine you twist your head slightly to match me, and your hair falls thickly between our mouths ... at last I am rewarded for my patience at last you reel in your helpless catch having driven me to the very brink, you finally take pity on me and as your mouth opens I drink you in - like a man who has crossed the desert without water spicy smile, raspberry lips creamy tongue, angel hair, hint of briny-sweet from your glistening skin - all are a honey tangle in our mouths stirred by a love, passion and closeness unimaginable I surrender ... closing my eyes I give in to it ALL letting you gather me plunging - swimming up the current to your source willing to do all you wish or bid of me I am home, I am complete I am fulfilled and nourished and quenched I am yours, absolute the fool for your KISS. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "''K'' Contest, New Or Old" Poetry Contest, Constance La France, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Your Best Free Verse Love Poem Poetry Contest", John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Choice 2, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 10th Place ~ in the "Help Me Fall In Love" Poetry Contest, Mystic Rose, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/15/2021 10:41:00 AM
Delicate, as a spicy kiss Greg! In your poem you take us into a sensual experience. As always, so well written with wonderful word choices, images with impact and musical flow! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/16/2021 12:42:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Sam, it is greatly appreciated. I wanted to describe one of "those" moments - the very special moments, (especially in lovemaking) - that seem to stand still, and the hundreds of thoughts and feelings that so often take place within very brief periods, (this one, just a couple of minutes, if that) ... I pray I was successful. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 9/15/2021 7:05:00 AM
Greg, excellent and congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this beautiful poem, well done and I love the image chosen too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/16/2021 12:40:00 AM
Thank you so kindly for my placement in your contest and the kind comments, Constance, it is greatly appreciated. I know this one takes a while to read, and I appreciate you giving it the attention required. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 9/14/2021 7:17:00 PM
Amazing poem for that special someone...Congrats on your win Gregory :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/16/2021 12:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Carol - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 9/14/2021 4:50:00 PM
Wow! Such beautiful narration, a vivid illustration of her, and above all, an admirable flow of words and feelings. Congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/16/2021 12:37:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Christuraj, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Blessings! :o)
Date: 8/23/2020 4:14:00 PM
This is epic poetry in both scope and detail, Greg. I love the "we feels like I" section and the line, "But that LOOK holds me boundless, / As my body holds yours." You have captured so many details of sight, taste, sound in that singular moment as you described in your soupmail to me this morning. I love how this builds to the (dare I say, climactic?) ending with home/completed/nourished/quenched/fulfilled... like a Gsus right before the big G finish. Beautiful writing, thanks for the tip ~ JW
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/24/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, my friend! This was an early one, (this is a re-post), and it sort of set my compass as far as trying to do something unusual, or at least unexpected, with my writing ... we ALL have a million of these instants each day - life is just a chain of them, really - but we tend to tie them together into bigger thoughts or impressions ... I thought it would be fun to try and break those impressions down into the busy bits of our spinning thoughts. Thanks so much for seeing and appreciating that, Brother - it makes the writing worthwhile! Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/22/2020 6:06:00 PM
Just realized that the word "bard" is in the root of your name! Pretty cool don't you think?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/23/2020 2:20:00 AM
Yes - thank you, Sam! That is my nickname here at The Soup, and has been for a while ... I think it was Daniel Turner who first started calling me "The Bard", (or maybe Charlie M or WW?). It is pretty cool, though I will never be in a class with the TRUE bard. Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/22/2020 6:05:00 PM
Hey Gregory, This is pretty special and so descriptive of intimacy. You really built the mood from beginning to end and I love the voices of the two lovers. Nice images! Congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/23/2020 2:14:00 AM
Thank you very, very much, Sam - this was one of the first pieces I wrote here and the very first 1st place win I ever received, so it will always be special. It is taken directly from memory, too, and that makes it even more so. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/20/2020 1:28:00 PM
- A captivating, comfortable and wonderful poem, Gregory ... I rarely read such long poems ... but, I read it again with pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/23/2020 2:02:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Anne-Lise, cuz this one is a time investment for sure - I'm so pleased that you found that time worthwhile - blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3

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