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Below is the poem entitled KISMET OF FANCY which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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  the porous moon drips wine
into the crystal goblet  of fancy
as late night beguiles my skin, reeling
        on a friday parade of lights;
     my  hips oh so beckon, swaggering  to and fro..
impossible to deny the celestial ride
of a soul flitting in an out of supple thoughts
         when imagination dangles on anklets of stars
      as  naked rhythm grows, my free will abides
               to sip the juice of  this one night..
 and out on a carnival, Pegasus  wheels
the carousel  among wooden horses,
    sprinkling stardust on a comet ride oh so high
           to reel kismet of my heart
tingling flesh against ingot of time...endless,

           i will not wake, not yet.

              .        ...          ..

Fantasy Contest of Shadow Hamilton
23 June 13

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Nette this is a lovely poem. Your creativity and imagination is always outstanding, such talent my friend. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:24:00 PM
    A great win, Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 5:36:00 AM
    hi Nette super most enjoyable poem congrats on your win ty for entering Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Dreamy and beautiful

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Excellent beauty about kismet lovely worded in poem. It's genius. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:23:00 AM
    Excellent. Well pened. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 8:49:00 PM
    It's a joy to read your poems every time you post them! This one is no different, it is far greater than anything I write! You keep outdoing yourself with each piece that you write! What a precious write this one truly is! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Majestic as the porous moon!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Excellent use of the language here - and you even have a classical reference which adds to the poem's effect. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:37:00 PM
    the imagery in this is superb I love it Nette you have excelled Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Nette , Love your last line . Great dream ! Your imagination is wonderful. hugs Anne

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:43:00 PM
    I love the word Kismet, it is a newbie for me, but you use it well in this creative awe inspiring write, I believe I wouldn't want to wake up either in this heaven Nette, may I share your space sister? love, xxx

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Dreams of fantasy?..Reads like a winner to me..Great job that you have done with descriptive lines..If for a contest, should place high..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara