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Kintsuroi

Contest entry: Kintsuroi Oh the mass of rotted enamel The disfiguration of an old time beauty Brown gravestones twisted It really is not me… No amalgam to repair I think I will be bold And look into kintsuroi And get them fixed with gold A dashing smile of golden teeth I will flash your way But I think it is expensive and You may have to pay © GG 8 /01/2014

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Date: 1/29/2014 6:57:00 AM
Love the wit you added in this one Mandy :) Hope you are enjoying the week so far xxx
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:19:00 PM
Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!
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Date: 1/13/2014 11:14:00 AM
Hey this is right up there with your best mi-Lady...
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:37:00 AM
haha, I liked the humor you added, dear Mandy.
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Date: 1/9/2014 12:55:00 AM
Hmm. Quite entertaining. Avoid amalgam at all cost.
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Date: 1/8/2014 1:44:00 PM
"I have decide to take better care and floss my dear"..... a dazzling smile you are bound to have using such an ancient craft..... this piece is so image filled i though i could get away with my first line.... very good write
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