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Kings Prophetic Dream

Civilizations Gold, silver, bronze, iron, stone, clay, Dream, statue, future.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2010 4:12:00 PM

Luv this one Marty.. u should enter it in Brian's poetry of the noun contest... good luck if u did or do....thankxxx for enjoying my "hottie" poem.. just posted another ... have to fit them in ..in between my jury duty stint.... enjoyed ... luv.. LInda-Marie

David Byrne

Date: 1/19/2010 9:23:00 PM

The joys of the despot!

Kakraba Afful

Date: 1/19/2010 4:14:00 PM

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/19/2010 2:32:00 PM

We have to keep that dream alive of the eternal home. Thanks for all your kind comments on my poems Marty! Peace and love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2010 10:28:00 AM

Magnificent senryu in honor of one of our most inspirational leaders, Marty. His "day" Monday was celebrated widely throughout the country and I was moved by the many remembrances. You've captured his dream, my friend. Been out of town and am now trying to catch up. Thanks so much for your support. Love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/19/2010 8:35:00 AM

New poem posted

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/19/2010 7:32:00 AM

The title is awesome, the poem flowed well, you described your prophetic dream perfectly in so little.....:JP]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/19/2010 5:38:00 AM

Great poem, Marty. You have used all nouns here. If you haven't visited Brian Strand's "Noun Haiku" contest, you should. The syllable count is 5-7-5 Like this poem. I think it would qualify as a great entry. Sincerely, Dane Ann